1、描写自己崇拜的人描写自己崇拜的人 写作写作指指导此类写作主要是介绍所敬佩的人的基本信息及其主要事迹。此类写作主要是介绍所敬佩的人的基本信息及其主要事迹。可以先介绍人物的外貌和个性可以先介绍人物的外貌和个性,然后介绍让人印象深刻的生然后介绍让人印象深刻的生平事迹。要介绍此人的伟大之处平事迹。要介绍此人的伟大之处,并表达一下对此人的看法并表达一下对此人的看法等。末尾一般总述人物的功绩等。末尾一般总述人物的功绩,也可以在记叙成长经历的同也可以在记叙成长经历的同时加入一些议论。时加入一些议论。描写描写的写作步骤的写作步骤:1.总体介绍总体介绍;2.列举主要经历列举主要经历;3.总结全文。总结全文。常用
2、常用句式句式1.He was from a.family.他来自一个他来自一个家庭。家庭。2.He is about.in height.他的身高大约是他的身高大约是3.By the age of 14,he had taught himself.14岁时岁时,他自学了他自学了4.She is already in her fifties,but she is still active in.她已经五十多岁了她已经五十多岁了,但仍然活跃在但仍然活跃在5.He is so kind and helpful that we all.他善良且乐于助人他善良且乐于助人,所以我们都所以我们都6.He i
3、s a worthy person for us to learn from.他是个值得我们学习的人。他是个值得我们学习的人。7.He devoted all his life to education.他把一生都奉献给了教育事业。他把一生都奉献给了教育事业。针对训练假如你敬佩的人是女排教练郎平。请你根据以下信息写一假如你敬佩的人是女排教练郎平。请你根据以下信息写一篇篇80词左右的短文来介绍郎平。词左右的短文来介绍郎平。1.郎平郎平,1960年年12月月10日出生于天津市。日出生于天津市。1973年年,13岁的郎平岁的郎平开始练习打排球开始练习打排球;2.1978年年,因在全国排球比赛中表现突
4、出因在全国排球比赛中表现突出,郎平进入国家队郎平进入国家队;3.郎平获得了很多奖牌郎平获得了很多奖牌;4.退役后退役后,郎平成为排球教练。郎平成为排球教练。2016年年,郎平带领中国女排郎平带领中国女排,时隔时隔12年年,在里约奥运会在里约奥运会(the Rio Olympic Games)上获得金牌上获得金牌;5.郎平是中国第一个作为球员和教练员均夺取奥运会冠军郎平是中国第一个作为球员和教练员均夺取奥运会冠军的排球运动员。的排球运动员。参考范文参考范文Lang Ping,who was born on 10 December 1960,is a famous volleyball coach
5、 and we all admire her very much.She began to play volleyball at the age of 13.She joined the national team because of her excellent performance in the national volleyball game.She was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards.After retiring from the volleyball team,she became a volleyball coach.
6、In 2016,she led the China womens volleyball team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games andwon the gold medal.She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach.She will always be remembered as a great woman.写作提示写作提示 主题主题:an introduction to Lang Ping必备词汇必备词汇:admire,the national team,excellent,award,retire from,a volleyball coach,the gold medal,the Olympic championship必备句型必备句型:1.who was born.2.She joined the national team because of.3.After retiring from the volleyball team,she.4.She is the first volleyball player to win.
