1、 读写任务写作指导读写任务写作指导记叙文 Narration1/40 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But
2、 two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I as
3、ked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字短文。2/40 Suddenly,I understand what he said.I must learn to be patient.Then I sat there and waited
4、 for fish patiently.I felt a fish touch the bait,but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）.At last,I caught it.This made me very happy.In the following six hours,I caught over 10 fish.On my way home,I thought what had happened on the bank.I gradually realized that the sec
5、ret of success was patience.3/40写作内容写作内容1)以约30个词概括短文关键点；2)然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心主要性一次经历，并包含以下关键点：a)叙述你认识到耐心主要性一次真实或虚构经历；（一定要有结果）b)你是怎样认识到耐心主要性；c)耐心对你生活、学习有什么影响。写作要求写作要求(1)能够参考阅读材料篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中句子；(2)标题自定。4/40读读A narrative(记叙文记叙文).写写A narrative(记叙文记叙文).写作模板写作模板四部曲四部曲5/40叙事类文章写作模板：1.Title(题目）题
6、目）1分分 有时不一定要求写标题有时不一定要求写标题2.Summary(概要概要 约约30-40个词个词)5分分3.Body(正文正文)19分分 1)A transitional sentence(过渡句引出例子过渡句引出例子)2)An example and so on (举一个相同主题例子举一个相同主题例子,再按题目要求谈感受或再按题目要求谈感受或 发表看法等发表看法等)4.Ending(结尾点题结尾点题)6/40What should we pay attention to when writing a title?第一步.Title7/40Suggestions:What should
7、 we pay attention to when writing a title?1.We should use a noun phrase or a sentence as a title.2.2.The first letter of every word in a title should be written in a capital(大写大写)letter except articles(冠词冠词),prepositions(介词介词)and conjunctions(连词连词).3.3.The number of a title had better not be more th
8、an 10 words.8/40写作内容写作内容1)以约30个词概括短文关键点；2)然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心主要性一次经历，并包含以下关键点：a)叙述你认识到耐心主要性一次真实或虚构经历；（一定要有结果）b)你是怎样认识到耐心主要性；c)耐心对你生活、学习有什么影响。写作要求写作要求(1)能够参考阅读材料篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中句子；(2)标题自定。9/40 Whats the title that we should use?1.Patience Is Important.2 The Important of Patience.3 How Import
9、ance Patience Is.4 Patience Is the Secret of Success.5 The Key to Success Patience10/40 summary?WritingHow to write a 第二步 summary11/40速读文章，找出要素：When(时间)：Where(地点)：Who(人物)：What(事件)How(发展经过）Result(结果)：What to learn(如篇末有点题语句，或升华主题，或点明给人们启示，或经念教训）skills12/40 Everyone has an experience they would rather
10、forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my
11、 stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.I
12、ts very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字短文。13/40 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.Last Sunday I went fishing.
13、After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full
14、of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字
15、短文。14/40 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt c
16、atch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he
17、answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字短文。15/40 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a less
18、on.Here is a story of mine.Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.Just then,I saw an old m
19、an sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fish
20、ing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字短文。16/40 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）,I sat down
21、 on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how
22、long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字短文。17/40 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are
23、 embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾
24、东西）,preparing to go back home.Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very importa
25、nt to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字短文。18/40 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting u
26、p my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I we
27、nt over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字短文。19/40 Everyo
28、ne has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I
29、 got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.“Four
30、hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字短文。20/40 Suddenly,I understand what he said.I must learn to be patient.Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently.I felt a fish touch
31、the bait,but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）.At last,I caught it.This made me very happy.In the following six hours,I caught over 10 fish.On my way home,I thought what had happened on the bank.I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.21/40 Sudden
32、ly,I understand what he said.I must learn to be patient.Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently.I felt a fish touch the bait,but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）.At last,I caught it.This made me very happy.In the following six hours,I caught over 10 fish.On my
33、 way home,I thought what had happened on the bank.I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.22/40 Suddenly,I understand what he said.I must learn to be patient.Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently.I felt a fish touch the bait,but I didnt move and waited for the right mom
34、ent to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）.At last,I caught it.This made me very happy.In the following six hours,I caught over 10 fish.On my way home,I thought what had happened on the bank.I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.23/40Summary 1.Focus on main ideas and omit(省去省去)examples,details.
35、(重视大意，省去详细例子、细重视大意，省去详细例子、细节节)2.Do not include your own opinion,but be sure to use your own words.(不能添加自己见不能添加自己见 解，不过要用自己语言概括解，不过要用自己语言概括）3.Write it in the third person.（第三人称）（第三人称）4.Control the number of words about 30.(25-40个字之内不会造成扣分个字之内不会造成扣分)5.How to check the summary:看关键点看人称看关键点看人称看时态看语法看结构看时
36、态看语法看结构24/402.How to summarize a story:Skill:Combination of five elements要素串联法要素串联法 WhatWhoWhenWhereResult What to learn(主题主题)was taught a lesson by an old manthe writer and an old manwhen going fishing last Sundayon the bank of the lakePatience is important.Patience is the secret of success.caught
37、some fish25/40套用语句记叙文摘要开头语:1The passage mainly tells us the writers experience of 2.The writer tells us his experience of 3 The story/passage is about4 The writer/author tells us about.5 The story mainly tells us that主题句+支撑句 故事写作目标/主题（一句）+故事大意（两三句）26/40 In this passage,the writer mainly tells us his
38、 experience of fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words）my version for the summary27/40过渡句过渡句 +经历经历+观点观点观点：教育意义、故事告诉我们什么道理，务观点：教育意义、故事告诉我们什么道理，务必要和材料一致。必要和材料一致。第三步第三步 正文正文28/40叙述类似经历过渡句1 1.This story reminds m
39、e of This story reminds me of a similara similar experienceexperience of mine.of mine.2 2.I had I had a similar experience.a similar experience.3 3.I once had I once had a similar experiencea similar experience.4 4.I also had the I also had the same experiencesame experience as the as the writer.wri
40、ter.5 5.This made me think of my This made me think of my ownown experience.experience.29/40+引出个人经历标志性句子：.Once,I Once,I.One day,One day,.On a Sunday morning last summer,On a Sunday morning last summer,.Last year,Last year,30/40第四步 Ending（总结句，呼应主题）总结句开头语：1 To sum up/In short/In conclusion/All in all
41、总之2.From the above two stories,we can see that+(主题）主题）3.Now,whenever I，Ill think of+4 From then on,I 31/40 All in all,patience is very important.（点题）（点题）Everyone should have patience to do everything.My version32/40本文写作框架：本文写作框架：The passage mainly tells us the The passage mainly tells us the experie
42、nce of experience of This story reminds me of a similar experience of mine.One day,I At first,I But just then,Finally,.And being patient is also important in my study and life.From then on,I From then on,I.Title33/40读写任务写作模模板读写任务写作模模板叙述类似经历过渡句叙述类似经历过渡句描写经历标志性句子描写经历标志性句子概括标志性句子和方法概括标志性句子和方法记叙文结论句记叙文结
43、论句RememberSumming up 34/40Homework Finish the whole composition,using the ways we learned in this period.35/40Thanks!36/40Lets enjoy the possible version for the original passage!(Using the bus-waiting situation)37/40 In this passage,the writer mainly tells us his experience of fishing and was taugh
44、t an unforgettable lesson by an old man.He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words）Patience Is the Secret of Success38/40 I have a similar experience.Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minutes,no bus came.I couldnt wait any longer and decided to walk to school.B
45、ut no sooner had I left than the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute,I would have caught it.If I wanted to take the next bus,I would have to wait for another 30 minutes.Only then did I realize the importance of patience.Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made.Patience also plays an important part in our study and work.With it we can achieve greater success.(110 words)39/40 Now,whenever I am to lose my patience,Ill think of the experience of waiting for a bus.(18 words)(161 words)40/40
