1、2023.6月续写月续写浙江兰溪兰荫中学浙江兰溪兰荫中学 李华李华第二节第二节 读后续写读后续写(满分满分25分分)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一种阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一种完整旳故事。完整旳故事。It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of
2、 New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul,my dads friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house l
3、istening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning.Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm,”he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草吃草
4、).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on o
5、ur horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep
6、green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织旳编织旳)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.Paragraph1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.Basicinformatio
7、n:DadWriterAvocationlikeneverbeforeAtriptotheWildWestLateafternoonnightMorningAfternoonSettings:1.listeningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby3.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.4.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwove
8、nblanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.2.headedslowlytowardsthemountains.Descriptionoftherabbit:ThelittleRabbithasacoatofwhite/brownhair.Thetwoearsarelongandprickuponitshead.Itisfurry,softandwhite/brownwithtworedeyesglaringabovethechin.Itseyesarelikeapairofsmallredbulbs.Exposedtosunlight,theybecome
9、littlepiecesofredthread.Itsearsarestraightandlongandtheycanturnandmoveslightly.Howcuteitis!小白兔全身盖一层洁白旳毛。两只耳朵很长，直立在头上。它长着一身柔软旳毛，瞪着一双红眼睛.眼睛像一对红色旳小灯泡，见到阳光时就微微眯起；耳朵长而直竖，有时还会微微转动,它多可爱啊agile（动作）敏捷旳，灵活旳 abletomovequicklyandeasilyAt20yearsoldhewasnotasagileasheisnow.20岁时他并不如目前这般矫健。scurryVERB(尤指受惊吓时)急奔，乱窜 Wh
10、enpeopleorsmallanimalsscurrysomewhere,theymovetherequicklyandhurriedly,especiallybecausetheyarefrightened.Theattackbegan,sendingresidentsscurryingforcover.攻击发动后，居民们纷纷奔逃规避。Bushy-tailedsquirrelsscurrytofindacornsandnutstohide.大尾巴旳松鼠忙着搜寻和贮藏橡果和松子gallop n.疾驰；疾驰疾驰；疾驰 v.飞驰；急速进飞驰；急速进行行whinny n.马嘶声；嘶声马嘶声；嘶声
11、v.嘶；以嘶声表嘶；以嘶声表达达用作名词用作名词 (n.)Thehorsewentoffatagallopacrossthefield.那匹马疾驰起来跑过田野。Allthehorsesbrokeintoagallop.全部旳马忽然疾驰起来。用作动词用作动词 (v.)Twopeoplegallopwhipandspur,donotcomeinthecityalittlewhile.两人快马加鞭飞驰，不一会儿就来到城里。Whenrunningfree,theAfghanHoundmovesatagallop,showinggreatelasticityandspringinhissmooth,po
12、werfulstride.自由奔跑时，阿富汗猎犬是飞驰旳，它平稳有力旳步幅显示出极大旳弹力和跳跃力。用作动词(v.)Thehorsewhinniedwithpleasure.那匹马舒适旳嘶叫著。Itisanillhorsecanneitherwhinnynorwaghistail.这匹马病了,它不会嘶鸣,也不会摆尾。ProblemsandsolutionsplotWritingpurposecharactersfeelingsWritingpurpose:分享作者年轻时旳和爸爸旳一次冒险行动，以及从爸爸那学到了某些东西。Feelings：从兴奋，开心到害怕，吃惊，再到放松，开心旳过程Chara
13、cters：文章没有明显旳显示出来，但爸爸应该是很有经验旳样子。Problemsandresolutions：第一段是problem旳产生。第二段是resolution旳过程。Paragraph1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Itwasverycute.Wetriedtohuntforit,walkingthroughforestsandhillswithoutanyrest.Wefinallygotintothedeepofaforest.Paragraph2:We had no idea where we
14、 were and it got dark.Wegotlost.Throughsomedifficulties,wegotbacksafewithourefforts.Paragraph1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.It was furry with a coat of gorgeous brown hair.After looking up at me with its pair of red bulbs,it began to scurry ahead.“Why not catch it and bri
15、ng it back to Uncle Paul?They must be very happy.”With this thought,I rode hard to hunt for it.Dad saw it and had to follow me.The rabbit was very agile,soon entering a mountain forest.We had to get down the horses,continuing the chase and totally forgetting the track back.Even though we tried despe
16、rately,the rabbit was out of sight in the end.Then we realized we were in the deep part of an forest.Paragraph2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.And dark clouds seemed to be gathering in the sky.Taking out the cell phone,we soon found something was wrong:no signal.And no compass.Frighten
17、ed,I stared at Dad ,trying to seek a solution for the trouble from him.“Maybe what you have learned in geography class works,he said,pointing to the stars in the sky.I knew he meant the North Star.Soon we found the right direction.We hurried back finding the horses.And the river was in sight again.T
18、he family was worried and about to call the police.At the sight of us,they were relieved and hugged us tightly.There was nothing more memorable than this rabbit hunting in my life!第一篇 Cherie老师Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,pullingbackthereinshar
19、dinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.Paragra
20、ph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround,wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.Timeappearedtobemerrier
21、andshorterwhenIstayedtogetherwithDadandbeforelong,thefarmhousecameintosight.Whatathrillingbutmemorableexperienceitwas!第二篇：Katie老师Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Iimmediatelygrewfondofthefurryrabbitandcalledoutexcitedly,“Dad!Look!”Alarmed,therabbitranawayinaflash.Ifollowedite
22、agerly,hopingtocatchitasmytrophyforthetrip.Mydadjustfollowedme,knowingitwasimpossibletostopme.Wetrackedtherabbitforabouttenminutesuntilitgotcompletelyoutofsight.Depressedandtired,Isuggestedgoingback.Butapparently,wehaddivergedfromthetrackUnclePaulwarnedustokeep.(86words)We had no idea where we were
23、and it was getting dark.Thethoughtthatwemighthavegotlostinsuchdarknesssentshiversdownmyspine.Tearsoffearandregretfilledmyeyes.Fortunately,DadwasnotsopanickedasIwas.Hekeptsilentandlistenedverycarefullyashetookmyhorsereinandledtheway.Wehadwanderedforwhatseemedlikeageswhensuddenlyarivercameintosight.Ho
24、pefully,wecouldfindourwaybacktothefarmhouseifwefollowedtheriver.Finally,wearrivedhomesafelyjustintimeforsupper,butwhatanexperience!Itturnsouttheresalwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm.(114words)第三篇：Oz老师Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itwassoquickthatmyhorsewasscared.Th
25、ehorsestartedtoneigh,shiverandgraduallylosecontrol.ItsuddenlyrantoanotherdirectionawayfromtheinitialtrackUnclePaulhaswarnedustokeep.Mydadheldtheropetightlyinordertocalmthehorsedown.However,itdidntwork.Ourcowboyhatswereevenlostwhilethehorsewasrunningwildandfinallywefelldownfromthehorseandthehorsejust
26、ranawayleavingmeandmydadlyingontheground.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Mylegswerehurtsothatmydadhadtocarrymeontheback.“Wegetlost,right?”Iaskedmydad,“Yes.Butdontworry,wellfindthewaybackhome.”Weslowlywalkedtowardstheluminousdirection.“Iguesswerelateforsupper.”Sensingmyfearandconc
27、erns,mydadtriedtomakemelaugh.Atthattime,wesawtheriverinfrontofus.“Dad,thisistherivernexttoourfarmhouse.Wecanfollowtherivertofindourwayhome.”“Exactly!Howcleveryouare!”Thenwefollowedtheriverbankandfinallyourhousecameintooursight.Reflectingonthismemory,Iregardedthisexperienceasmyspecialadventurewithmyd
28、ad.第四篇：Niehai老师Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itgotsuchafrightthatitrushedatahighspeed.I,frightenedtoo,grabbedthereintightly.Minuteslater,thehorsewasoffthetrackandIfoundthattherewasnosignofmydad.Inthemiddleofnowhere,Ifeltawaveoffearwraparoundme.Worsestill,theraincamepouringdownandIwa
29、swetthrough.Afterseeminglylonghours,therecamealoudcryofmydad.Asaquickresponse,Ishoutedinaloudvoice.Dad,Imhere!Tracingmyvoice,Dadfinallyfoundmeandwegotreunited.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Themoonburstthroughthecloudsandcastitssilverlightalloverthewetland.Wewanderedslowlyonourhorses,feel
30、ingatalosswhattodo.Suddenly,thesoundofafloatingrivercaughtmyattention.Dad,maybewecanfindthefarmhousedowntheriver.Dadnoddedwithapproval.Withgreatcare,werodeourhorsesalongtheriver.Shortlyafterwards,theUnclePaulsfarm,sureenough,cameintooursight.Finally,wegottothefarm,safeandsound.Whatatriplikeneverbefo
31、re!第五篇：Tanya老师 Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorserearedintotheair,letoutafrightenedwhinny,andgallopedoffthetrack.Iheldonfordearlife,brancheslashingintomyarmsandface.Finallyhesloweddown,thenstopped,butlookingaroundattheendlessseaoftrees,Iknewwehadgottenhopelesslylost.Icalled;theon
32、lyanswerwastherustlingofthewindinthetrees.Thehorsemeanderedthroughthelonesomepines,withmecontinuingtocallandscanthehorizonforafamiliarlandmark,earsprickedforthesoundofahorseorahumanvoice.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.AtlastIheardthewelcomesoundofrushingwater-theriver!Gratefullywewenttothebankan
33、ddrankourfill.Wefolloweditinthedirectionthatthesunhadset,andeventuallyheardthefamiliarfrogs,andsawthecomfortingsightoftheoldfarmhouse,mydadshiningahugelampfromtheporch,guidingourwayhome.Molly Dorighi3/6/202307:52:35pmLostinTheWild,WildWestItwasthesummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbef
34、ore.Hedecidedtotakemeonatriptothewild,wildwest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydadsfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisranchinPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspen
35、tthenightintheguestroomlisteningtothecrickets,owls,andcoyotes.Veryearlyinthemorning,unclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.Thedaystartsatdawnonmyranchhesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpauntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithunclePaultotakethesheepouttograze.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandunclePaulridinghorses
36、,theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedunclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.DontbelateforsupperunclePaulcriedandkeeptothetrailsothatyoudon
37、tgetlost.OKmydadcriedback.AfterawhilewecouldhardlyseeunclePaulandhisfarmhouse.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunblendedtocreateamajesticscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwovenblanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.原文地址：原文地址：coyote英 katSuddenlyal
38、ittlecoyotejumpedoutinfrontofmyhorseandstartledhim.Hewassostartled,hetookoffrunningfasterthanIimaginedhecould.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrailandkeptrunning,andonlystoppedonceitreachedtheriver.Itseemsthewatermusthavecalmedhimdownabit.Itwasabeautifulspo
39、tandasfrightenedasIwasjustafewminutesearlier,IwashappythatIgotachancetoseesuchaplace.Mydadthoughtitwasgorgeoustoo,buthesaidthatwehadtoleavebecausethesunwassettingandhedidnotwantustogetlost.Wehadleftthetrailandwedidnothaveacompass.Thelastthingwewantedwastotrytofindourwayhomeinthedark.Weturnedaroundto
40、startbackbutthetrailwasnowhereinsight.Thefrightenedhorsehadrunsofastandsofarthatwehadnoideawherewewere.Bynowthesunhadalmostdippedbehindthehorizonandwehadtothinkfast,sowetriedtofindourfootprintsinthedustysand.Butaswelookedwegotevenmorelostandthenitgrewdark.Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktother
41、anch.Irememberedthatthebigdipperwasrightabovemyunclesranch.Wemadesurethatourhorseswerecalmbeforewesetoffonthelongjourneyhome.Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldntseehungrycoyotes.Weheadedtowardahighrocktoseewherethebigdipperwasinthesky.“IseeitDad,Iseeit,”Isaidexcitedly.Myhorsega
42、vealittlesnortandaswesetofftofindourwaybackhome.Wegallopedalongthedirt.“Honey,stop,”mydadsaidwithashakyvoice.IstoppedwithastonishmentbecauseIhaveneverseenmydadsofrightenedinmyentirelife.“Ithinkthatsanothercoyote.Itsaboutdinnertimeforthem.“GO.RUN,”mydadshouted!Wegallopedlikethewind.Atlastwewereattheranch.Ihuggedmyuncleastightasamamabearhugginghercubs.IsnuggledtheirdogBaxterandkissedmydadgoodnight.AsIgotintomypajamas,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.IyawnedasmyeyesslowlyclosedandIdriftedofftosleep.n.喷鼻息紧抱；偎依
