1、.As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.There is no doubt that education and the learning process has changed since the introduction of computers: The search for information has become easier and amusing, and connectivity has
2、expedited the data availability. Thoughexpertssystems have made computers more intelligent, they have not yet become a substitute of the human interaction in the learning process. In my opinion what can be expected is a change of the teachers role, but not their disappearance from the classroom.Nobo
3、dy can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with computers. The mere activity of touching and exploring this device constitutes an enjoyable task for a child. This, accompanied by the relaxing attitude and software interactivity, usually contributes to a better grasping of
4、new knowledge. At a higher educational level the availability of digital books, simulators and other academic materials provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that otherwise would not be at hand.But, besides the increasing complexity and behavior of intelligent software,
5、which is usually embedded in the academic digital material, the need for human interaction in the learning process will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. There is the necessity for a human being to be able to determine what the specificsneeds of each individual are. The expertis
6、e of a teacher in how to explain and adapt complex concepts to different individuals can hardly be mimicked by a computer, no matter how sophisticated its software is.As computers are becoming a common tool for teaching, teachers should be more aware of their role as guides in the acquisition of kno
7、wledge rather than transmitters of facts. They have to be open minded to the changes that are takingplaces, keep updated and serve as problem solvers in the learning process, thus allowing students to discover thefactfor themselves.To summarize, in my personal view, teachers play and will continue t
8、o play an important role in the classroom, especially at the primary level. No matter how complex computers become, there will be no replacement for the human interaction, but in theway haw this interaction takes place. This is an excellent essay! Are you a native English speaker? Well done. The onl
9、y problem is that this essay is too long, 365 words instead of 250-265 maximum.Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.Every four years, the whole world stops to
10、 watch international sporting events such as the Olympics and the Football World Cup in which athletes show their best performance to make their country proud. These sporting occasions have proved to be helpful in easing international tension in difficult times when powerful leaders were trying to c
11、ontrol the worlds economy and other governments were fighting over the land.The Olympic Games are one of the best examples which prove how sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily. From the ancient History, when Greeks and Romans would interrupt battles to participate in the
12、games, to the more recent international disputes, when athletes from Palestine and Israel would forget their differences, compete peacefully and even embrace each other after an event. Moreover, these popular events have called the worlds attention to the terrible consequences of wars; thus some lea
13、ders have tried to reach agreements to end their disputes and live peacefully.Similarly, international sporting events show benefits in some developing countries which live in a daily internal civil war. For example, Brazil has a high rate of unemployment, lack of education, hunger, crime, poverty a
14、nd corruption which leads to an immense embarrassment of being Brazilian and a low self-esteem. However, when the Football World Cup starts, the Brazilian squad, which is considered the best team in the world, provokes an amazing feeling of pride in their country. Most people seem to forget all thei
15、r problems and even the criminal activity decreases. They paint roads with the national colors, wear the Brazilian team shirts and buy national flags. Moreover, the competition brings families and neighbors together and even rival gangs watch the games and celebrate peacefully.In conclusion, popular
16、 sporting events play an important role in decreasing international tensions and liberating patriotic feelings as history has shown.This is a great essay, the ideas, language, structure of paragraphs and sentences, and your grammar show a good command of the English language. In my opinion it is Band 8. Keep up the good work.Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for help
